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BrightScales Pug & Yoshi Fan!
Number of posts : 1775 Age : 28
| Subject: SSB story-mario's side Fri Jul 18, 2008 2:59 pm | |
| SSB Story Chapter One: mario's side
mario on the day of sign up was not very nervous because he aviously was in the game. He was one of the people that helped decide who was in and out. After they had a cast of 32 characters they only had to more try outs!
"finaly."thought mario to himself.
"whos next?" he asked peach.
"Geno." said peach
Geno walked in. "im here!"
"show us your moves!' said mario.
"GENO BLAST"
the jugdes applauded. Then finaly mario said, "you can be back stage helping sound effects."
"Whos the last one?" said mario in a relieved tone for this was the final try out.
"Mewtwo." answered Peach.
Mewtwo enered and showed off his moves.
"we have those moves with lucario sorry we dont need you this time."mario said
ill post the rest later! i hope you guys like it! | |
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Forsaken Lament 44 Administrator
Number of posts : 2293 Age : 37
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Sun Aug 03, 2008 11:48 pm | |
| not bad pugs...now i FINALLY know why those characters were left out! It's soooo unfair!!! What happens next??? | |
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BrightScales Pug & Yoshi Fan!
Number of posts : 1775 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:16 pm | |
| - ForsakenLament 04 wrote:
- not bad pugs...now i FINALLY know why those characters were left out! It's soooo unfair!!!
What happens next??? lol thanks ok part 2! practice! the newest characters such as diddy kong olimar were really excited to start. they practiced their moves on the Battlefield (starter stage). they practiced day and night. Finally the tourney to be an unlockable character began! final round was diddy vs toon link vs lucario vs wolf . T link came in third Wolf came in second and lucario came in first. so diddy was unable to be an unlockable. they picked some others to be unlockables as well. then out of no ware bowser popped out! "hey you noobies!" bowser said loudly. "what are you doing here, B-b-b-bowser?" questioned olimar nervously. "ive come to show why i you guys should just..." "get out of here bowser dont make us fire you!" shouted mario running in, "get back to final destination at once" "GRRRR," growled bowser furiously, "you cant control me! i could beat you easy!" "prove it then!" challenged Mario. "Alright then tomorrow Final destination 3 o clock pm ill beat the fire out of you!" threatened bowser as he walked away. To be continued..... | |
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Forsaken Lament 44 Administrator
Number of posts : 2293 Age : 37
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Thu Aug 07, 2008 7:25 pm | |
| wow...very suspenseful Pugs!!! Who knows what will happen...Mario is a lot worse in Brawl after all... | |
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firegremlin
Number of posts : 2244 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Tue Aug 12, 2008 7:12 am | |
| i bet that bowser will beowning mario and then all of a sudden luigi pops up and takes him out! ~firegremlin~ | |
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BrightScales Pug & Yoshi Fan!
Number of posts : 1775 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Sun Aug 17, 2008 4:21 pm | |
| part 3! the two looked at each other waiting for the first strike. finally bowser started a flame attacked! mario countered with a powerful flame ball. the two flames collided, which caused a big explosion.
"not bad.." Bowser burst out,"FOR A PLUMBER"
Bowser aimed a punch at Mario's head. Mario dodged it with a roll and kick. The kick made bowser fall to the ground with a thud. He quickly got up.
"your not bad yourself" replied Mario
then all of a sudden the ground began to shake. A giant ball shinning with many colors appeared. they both new what it was.
to be continued.. NOTE: part three is not over i just dont have enough time atm | |
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StarRoadWarrior Administrator
Number of posts : 3628 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Sun Aug 31, 2008 11:42 pm | |
| WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? I MUST KNOW NOW!!!! | |
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firegremlin
Number of posts : 2244 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Mon Sep 01, 2008 1:27 pm | |
| I'm dying of tension pugs! relieve us ~firegremlin~ | |
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SilensCaelum Moderator
Number of posts : 616 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Tue Sep 09, 2008 1:50 am | |
| Wow! Pugs this is a great story! I really want to know what happens next!!! Keep them coming Pugs, you're doing great! | |
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firegremlin
Number of posts : 2244 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Mon Sep 29, 2008 2:48 pm | |
| when is the next part coming? ~firegremlin~ | |
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SmashedBrother Administrator
Number of posts : 2107 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Fri Oct 17, 2008 4:36 pm | |
| - firegremlin wrote:
- when is the next part coming?
~firegremlin~ Ditto | |
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BrightScales Pug & Yoshi Fan!
Number of posts : 1775 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Tue Oct 28, 2008 3:32 pm | |
| alright guys sorry for the wait!
Mario looked at the shiny ball in astonishment. He had no idea what it was! However, Bowser took advantage of Mario's day dreaming and used his ground pound (down B) on Mario. As Bowser came closer and closer. Finally, Mario realized what Bowser was doing. He rolled out of the way, and threw a fireball at Bowser's face. Bowser did a midair dodge and fireball kept going and hit the mysterious ball.
Mario felt a little power pulse through his body.For some reason he was drawn to the glowing ball. He gave it a midair punch. As he felt it break, he felt overwhelming power, and new he could not keep the power contained.
"Ive got unleash this power before it kills me." he thought to himself
Bowser was coming in for a strike at Mario. Mario aimed a fireball to counter Bowser's oncoming attack, but not just a fireball come out but an inferno of fire! Bowser looked Horrified.
to be continued....... | |
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firegremlin
Number of posts : 2244 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:23 pm | |
| thats really good pugs but in part 3 it said bowser and mario knew what "the ball with shining colours" was but in this bit it said mario had no idea what it was! what happened there? ~firegremlin~ | |
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StarRoadWarrior Administrator
Number of posts : 3628 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Tue Oct 28, 2008 6:02 pm | |
| easy! bowser erased mario mind | |
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firegremlin
Number of posts : 2244 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Tue Oct 28, 2008 6:04 pm | |
| - Jordan24Geno wrote:
- easy! bowser erased mario mind
well that explains it, how could I not get it before >_> ~firegremlin~ | |
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StarRoadWarrior Administrator
Number of posts : 3628 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Tue Oct 28, 2008 6:15 pm | |
| easy! bowser erased YOUR mind | |
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BrightScales Pug & Yoshi Fan!
Number of posts : 1775 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:25 pm | |
| - firegremlin wrote:
- thats really good pugs but in part 3 it said bowser and mario knew what "the ball with shining colours" was but in this bit it said mario had no idea what it was! what happened there?
~firegremlin~ They knew what it was but didnt know it was going to do or what was going to happen | |
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SmashedBrother Administrator
Number of posts : 2107 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:38 pm | |
| oh, that makes more sense, lol!
P.S. When do you plan on writing the next chapter? | |
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BrightScales Pug & Yoshi Fan!
Number of posts : 1775 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Wed Jan 28, 2009 6:40 pm | |
| - SmashedBrother wrote:
- oh, that makes more sense, lol!
P.S. When do you plan on writing the next chapter? now!=P A roaring inferno blew Bowser completely of Final Destination. Mario had won. "Great Job, Mario!" Peach dashed on. "Thanks" Mario replied The next day subspace emissary shooting began The end of Chapter 3 | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Thu Feb 05, 2009 9:37 pm | |
| Not bad, tighten up the spelling and grammer to appease my grammer nazi and that would be worth publishing on FanFiction.Net |
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BrightScales Pug & Yoshi Fan!
Number of posts : 1775 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: SSB story-mario's side Fri Apr 17, 2009 11:49 pm | |
| - The Burning Soul wrote:
- Not bad, tighten up the spelling and grammer to appease my grammer nazi and that would be worth publishing on FanFiction.Net
well ty roy | |
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